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Angel of Mercy by ~rhythmone:iconrhythmone:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Song


Verse
This life of mine, it’s hard,
Waves of pain and hurt,
Resolutions burned and charred,
And crumpled letters in the dirt.

Chorus
Mud on my face, in my eyes,
My excuse for a disguise,
Excuse me while I bear my soul,
But now it’s frostbitten in the cold.

Verse 2
This darkness overwhelms me,
My hand vanishes in the mist,
My fears have come to life,
But something’s grabbed my wrist.

Chorus

Verse 3
An angel lifts me up,
And I look into his face,
Kindness and concern are written here,
His movements show no haste.

He lifts me higher until I stand,
And we walk together hand in hand,
The world is moving behind my back,
But with my angel there is nothing I lack.
©2006-2009 ~rhythmone
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Author's Comments

Written after talking to my boyfriend on the phone...i was feeling horrible and he made my night a little better. Thats one of the best skills a person can have.

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~elauzel May 26, 2006, 8:42:22 PM
hmm, like a song! I like it. at first I thought 'verse' was a part of the poem, and then I caught on - I liked that I didn't immediately catch on.

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Let yourself go.
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~rhythmone May 26, 2006, 8:47:27 PM
^_^ levi might write the music for it soon

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"You don't take a photograph. You ask, quietly, to borrow it." ~Author Unknown
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=Zethara May 27, 2006, 5:37:22 AM
It has a lyrical quality about it...Very nicely done!

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“If all my friends were to jump off a bridge, I wouldn't follow. I'd be at the bottom to catch them when they fall.”
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~rhythmone May 27, 2006, 3:35:00 PM
because....they're lyrics :D but yeah, thanks again

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"You don't take a photograph. You ask, quietly, to borrow it." ~Author Unknown
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=Zethara May 27, 2006, 5:21:05 PM
Oh.. well that makes sense lol... :blush: Hahaha

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“If all my friends were to jump off a bridge, I wouldn't follow. I'd be at the bottom to catch them when they fall.”
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~happybunny1 Jun 4, 2006, 12:54:57 PM
oh this is really nice! :+fav: i love this

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× nEvEr × wAnTeD× To Be × DiFFeReNt × I jUsT× wAnTeD ×To Be × mE ×
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~rhythmone Jun 4, 2006, 5:26:30 PM
why thank you ^_^ thanks so much for the fav too, it means a lot cause the last few months for me have been extrememly slow o.o

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"You don't take a photograph. You ask, quietly, to borrow it." ~Author Unknown
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~TBOmotion Apr 22, 2008, 8:14:37 AM
you know what, i just read it again and i think when i have some free time tonite, i'll do just that, cause i have a guitar and a bass at my house ready, and then i'll find a way to get it to you.

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The great acts of love are done by those who are habitually performing small acts of kindness.
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